A common problem I see in beginning writer's manuscripts is an overload of exposition. It's been dubbed "exposition overload" for a reason. Don't tell the reader about the weather, pretty scenery, or how the bakery down the streets smells in the wintertime before we get to the main character (MC). Only note these things if … Continue reading Purple Prose

I love a well placed adjective. Key words: well placed. An adjective is: a descriptive word or phrase that modifies a noun. An adjective describes a noun. An adverb describes a verb. An adjective tells what a noun is (hot, bright, solid, thin), whereas an adverb describes how something is (slowly, mildly, carefully). The bright … Continue reading Adjectives

I check the articles on Writer's Digest from time to time. They've always got short, to the point advice on writing. I had to share this one: http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/7-reasons-writing-a-book-makes-you-a-badass